Pretty good! The darkness had me pretty worried for the first half, but after the monster like noise, didn't seem like it was happening anymore and nothing else was really happening so I was able to relax a bit. I think taking advantage of that and making more unsettling noises would be good to keep the player on their toes. Made a video, hope you enjoy!
Game looks and plays well. I was enjoying it and thought it was going to build up to something big, but it didn't which is a shame lol either way I still enjoyed it, well done. check out my playthrough below :D
Hey Sean173, thanks so much for making this game!! Your game was the first one and sadly to say I didn´t get scared at all, it was very simplistic and definitely could improve. I believe the crickets in your game were having a concert and that was something I enjoyed but at the same time distracted me from the incident at the end. All in all, if the boy was having these type of nightmares that turned into reality I don´t wish that upon anyone.
I would like to collaborate with you on your next projects.
I'm a game writer for various indie studios , and always on the lookout for new challengers.
My role as a writer is to formulate character / narrative driven documents , gaming and character backstories , as well as implementing puzzles and side quests.
I too have completed my first kinetic VN - Axiom Alternative. Available for purchase on STEAM, and very soon will be working on another VN project with a different studio, and Axiom Alternative 2 is currently available on STEAM. I'm up for any challenge, and would like the opportunity to show your studio what writing material I can bring to the table.
I'm currently working on a document for a psychological, horror type game. Maybe we could collab on future gaming projects.
I wish it was longer and there was more to it but it was a good short game and i enjoyed it. Ending was surprising. If you can check my playthrough and maybe subscribe it'd mean so much, Have a good day :)
So like, if you are a big horror junkie like me just know before going in you most likely won't get much out of this. The horror here is more ambiance than anything. Solid title for newbies to horror just not good for those who have a bit more experience under their belt
Cool little horror experience. Definitely this poor kid's worst nightmare.. Ending was a bit abrupt, would have liked to see more. Otherwise, awesome job~
Good game!, There was a couple of scary and unnerving moments but they were not super repetitive and overdone which is a mistake a lot of these games make.
I felt like the environment could have used a little more detail and like some of the background noises were a little too loud but those are not huge details to worry about.
Yo! I think I have already found a critical game-breaking bug in your game.
The Screen Resolution is SCREWED UP! Only the image of the menu screen with your name on it! I've seen Youtubers playing this game and somehow were able to access the game without any interruption...
Kinda annoying but I will wait patiently for the next update.
EDIT: I read some comments and I might not be the only one with this issue, I just hope the screen resolution gets fixed in the future!
I was on the edge of my seat the whole time. The suspense had me hooked I kept expecting something to creep up from behind and attack me. Excellent work my dude this game gave me chills.
Very nice work. I liked the premise you created. We can pretty much all relate to the experience of waking up at night and being afraid of what might be lurking right outside our bedroom door. The creepy thing about being a young kid is that at such hours of the night, the mind can play tricks on you. Every sound becomes magnified, every creak in the night becomes a monster in our minds. My biggest note would be to consider how the ending is delivered. The game kind of ends abruptly, and for me it left me confused about how to feel. I do feel bad for the protagonist, but because it's a short game, it's hard to feel too bad because there isn't enough time to get emotionally invested in him before the ending is revealed. You've got the outlines of a good story here that just needs some more fine tuning to become something awesome. Please keep making content and keep up the good work!
Thank YOU. Always be encouraged; you developed this game and you have great potential. I hope years from now you'll still be developing games and that each one will be better than the last. Hit me up with your future projects! Would love to play them. Thanks again man!
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Pretty good! The darkness had me pretty worried for the first half, but after the monster like noise, didn't seem like it was happening anymore and nothing else was really happening so I was able to relax a bit. I think taking advantage of that and making more unsettling noises would be good to keep the player on their toes. Made a video, hope you enjoy!
This house is huge and has long hallways. Very creepy cause it has no long flashlight, the design was good too. Overall good game.
Unexpectedly sad ending, but scared the hell out of me throughout!
Super tense game with really interesting sound design! Good job. Looking forward to what else you've got in store!
Game looks and plays well. I was enjoying it and thought it was going to build up to something big, but it didn't which is a shame lol either way I still enjoyed it, well done. check out my playthrough below :D
just did a blind playthrough of your game really good and I finished it too well design creepy really worth a playthrough
watch here
Had some fun with this game, I've never commented on an Itch.io page before lol so here is my video!
https://youtu.be/5NMfIsWJHzQ
Thanks for watching and subscribe to my channel!
Very short but very efficient in it's scares :) good job with this game and keep up the good work !
Btw I'm trying to reach 40 subs so if you enjoyed the video it would mean the world to me that you'd consider subscribing to my channel :)Thanks so much man! Appreciate it.
Hey Sean173, thanks so much for making this game!! Your game was the first one and sadly to say I didn´t get scared at all, it was very simplistic and definitely could improve. I believe the crickets in your game were having a concert and that was something I enjoyed but at the same time distracted me from the incident at the end. All in all, if the boy was having these type of nightmares that turned into reality I don´t wish that upon anyone.
pretty cool game liked it a lot! I can't wait to play more games from you!
Hi there,,
I would like to collaborate with you on your next projects.
I'm a game writer for various indie studios , and always on the lookout for new challengers.
My role as a writer is to formulate character / narrative driven documents , gaming and character backstories , as well as implementing puzzles and side quests.
I too have completed my first kinetic VN - Axiom Alternative. Available for purchase on STEAM, and very soon will be working on another VN project with a different studio, and Axiom Alternative 2 is currently available on STEAM. I'm up for any challenge, and would like the opportunity to show your studio what writing material I can bring to the table.
I'm currently working on a document for a psychological, horror type game. Maybe we could collab on future gaming projects.
Any questions, feel free to ask.
Regards,
Redewaan
This was really cool, and the ending was a surprise!!! I do wish there was more to interact with than doors, but the ambience was amazing!!!!
Here is my play through, if anyone is interested!!!
Game was funny and a bit spooky too!
super duper mega geil
I have some questions, but didn't mind playing. Can't wait to see more!
That Was So Dark...
Help me reach 1000 SUBS!loved it
This is a really cool short game.
Subscribe please.Really creepy game! I like this kind of thing! Good work!
I had these type of Nightmares too when I was a child...
Help my Youtube reach 1000 SUBS!So like, if you are a big horror junkie like me just know before going in you most likely won't get much out of this. The horror here is more ambiance than anything. Solid title for newbies to horror just not good for those who have a bit more experience under their belt
Cool little horror experience. Definitely this poor kid's worst nightmare.. Ending was a bit abrupt, would have liked to see more. Otherwise, awesome job~
I was so scared and its hard to scare me i mean so hard to scare me so good game and i will follow you
Good game!, There was a couple of scary and unnerving moments but they were not super repetitive and overdone which is a mistake a lot of these games make.
I felt like the environment could have used a little more detail and like some of the background noises were a little too loud but those are not huge details to worry about.
Wish your game lots of success!
Yo! I think I have already found a critical game-breaking bug in your game.
The Screen Resolution is SCREWED UP! Only the image of the menu screen with your name on it! I've seen Youtubers playing this game and somehow were able to access the game without any interruption...
Kinda annoying but I will wait patiently for the next update.
EDIT: I read some comments and I might not be the only one with this issue, I just hope the screen resolution gets fixed in the future!
Hi there, I’m so sorry for this bug. I’m working on it. I have a question, were you able to see the play and quit button at all in the game?
no
Sorry, there wasn't anything there my friend.
Too short, and not scary at all. Do yourself a favor, and don't install it.
Nice game
Useless. Doesn't start at all.
Try to install DirectX.
And don't say "Useless" to a game when you haven't even played. That is rude.
I was on the edge of my seat the whole time. The suspense had me hooked I kept expecting something to creep up from behind and attack me. Excellent work my dude this game gave me chills.
thanks for playing! loved your gameplay
Omg, thank you so much for the feedback. I'll try way better next time!
Thank YOU. Always be encouraged; you developed this game and you have great potential. I hope years from now you'll still be developing games and that each one will be better than the last. Hit me up with your future projects! Would love to play them. Thanks again man!
short but nice i was expecting some big jumpscare lol
check out my vid if you want :)
Had a nice creepy atmosphere that had me tensed up the whole time and that was certainly an... interesting way to end a horror game. :)